PotC 2

[Corinna Turner]

Here is the beginning of my PotC2 FF! I don't really like this part, but I promise it's going to be better later.

Pirates of the Caribbean II

Chapter 1: Memories

Will was standing in front of the altar, waiting for his bride Elizabeth to come in and thinking about her.

~Flashback~

Five years before:

Will and Elizabeth were standing outside the castle and kissed. As they broke the kiss, they were both lost for words. Finally Will began to speak: „Elizabeth, you are the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met. I truly, deeply love you!“
„Will, I love you too!“
They began to kiss again.

The picture slowly vanished inside Will’s mind and was replaced by another one:

One year before:

Will and Elizabeth had come back to the placeb where they had been exactly four years before. They had everything with them to picnic. Will asked Elizabeth to stand up and he got on his knee in front of her: „Elizabeth, we’ve been together for four years now and you mean everything to me, Will you marry me?“
„Yes, yes! Will, I love you so much!“

~End Flashback~

Will was suddenly brought back to reality as one of the servants came running into the church: „Something really terrible has happened. Miss Swann has been kidnapped. We couldn’t do anything about it. A man came into the room with a pistol. He took Elizabetn and ran out. I think he fled with a ship.“
„No!!!! Not Elizabeth!!!“

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[OrlandoBloom]

I like it...Please keep posting!! PMN!!

[Corinna Turner]

Thanks! Here is some more.

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„What? Where am I?“ Will looked up confused. He was lying in his bed and had no idea how he had got there.
„Mr Turner, you collapsed yesterday.“ The maid who was watching him said.
„What? Yesterday? Where is Elizabeth? Why didn’t you wake me up?“
„We couldn’t wake you up.“
„But Elizabeth? Where is she? Is someone looking for her? Is someone saving her?“
„Not yet. Commodore Norrington wanted to wait till you are awake.“
„Norrington? I’ll kill him!“ Will now became really furious, as always when something bad happened to Elizabeth. He tried to get out of the bed, but the maid held him back.
„You need rest, Mr Turner! I’m going to call Commodore Norrington. He’ll be here in half an hour and till then you’ll rest. And drink that.“ She handed him a glass with water and he drank it, while still cursing Norrington.
„And now just stay here and rest!“
Will wanted to protest, but he couldn’t, because he fell asleep again.

~Flashback~

Will was walking along a road. He was on his way to work. After Mr Brown had become too old for his job, Will had taken over the smithy. As he turned around a corner, he saw Elizabeth being cornered by Norrington.
„But, Elizabeth, are you sure you are happy with him? He still is a blacksmith!“, Will could hear Norrington say to Elizabeth.
„Yes, I am sure, that Will is the right one for me! I’m happier with him than I could ever have been with you, even if he is a blacksmith and you are a commodore.“ Elizabeth answered without hesitation.
„No, Elizabeth, you can’t be happy with him!!! You just can’t be!“
„Commodore, if you would please leave Elizabeth alone! She can decide for herself what she thinks is right.“ Will said, approaching the two of them.
„Look, look, Mr Turner!!! Shouldn’t you be working?“
„I was on my way, but I saw that you were threatening my fiancée.“
„I think threatening isn’t the right word. More like asking her whether she knew what she was doing!“
„Anyway, whatever it was, just leave, Commodore!!!“

~End Flashback~

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[Christine Daaé]

I like it! It's great!! Please keep posting!!
*grabs chair and popcorn and sits down*

[Corinna Turner]

Thanks! I just had the idea of another Flashback, which is before the last Flashback. I still have to write it, because our French lesson was to short to write all of it. It's going to be quite confusing. Really sorry!

[OrlandoBloom]

That's okay!

[Christine Daaé]

Please keep posting!! It's great!!

[Corinna Turner]

I wrote more in today`s French lesson! But it's only 1/3 of the Flashback! I'll finish it first, before I post it.

[Corinna Turner]

This is only the beginning of the next Flashback, but I won't be able to write more till next weekend, so I post the little part I have, really sorry!!!

~Flashback~

Will and Elizabeth were walking along the street. Elizabeth was wearing the ring Will had given her for their engagement, but no one knew about it. Unfortunetly they met Commodore Norrington.
„Elizabeth, Mr Turner! How nice to meet you.“, he said, as he took Elizabeth’s hand to kiss it. Then he noticed the ring. „Elizabeth, where did you get that ring from?“
„That’s none of your business.“
„I think it is! But you don’t have to tell me! I know what this means. You two are engaged.“
Will looked down, embarassed, but Elizabeth looked straight into Norrington’s eyes and nodded.
„Elizabeth, are you sure you want to do that? Are you sure about this?“
Elizabeth nodded again.
„I guess the gouvenor knows about this?“
„No, he doesn`t and he doesn`t need to know about it! I`ll tell him when I think the time is right.“
„But he is your father. He has the right to know and you’ll tell him! Immediately! I`ll make sure of this! You two will come with me!“
„Elizabteh, I think it`s better to just go with him. Your father will find out anyway.“, Will spoke for the first time. Elizabeth wanted to contradict, but Norrington was faster: „For once I agree with him! And for once he is right, because I am always right!“

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[SparrowDorkGurl]

not bad man, not bad........

[PirateMedallion]

Not bad at all! Very good! Please keep posting!
Needs more Jack, though...

[Christine Daaé]

LoL, Yes! More Jack, but, I love it!!

[Corinna Turner]

I finally have more!! Sorry, for the long wait. It will take some time till Jack appears.
This part is still part of the Flashback and the next part will as well.

So they went up to the castle, Will constantly calming Elizabeth who looked as if she wanted to kill Norrington. He could keep her from hurting Norrington, though he couldn’t keep her from shouting at him: „You bloody idiot!!! It’s none of your business what I am doing so why don`t you just stop ruining my life?“
„Watch your language, Miss Swann! I do not think your father would appreciate your behavior. All I want is for you to be happy... and for your father to know that you are happy.“
Elizabeth continued swearing only interrupted by Will muttering „Elizabeth!“ a few times.
When they arrived at the castle, the guard refused to let them inside. „Governor Swann is busy and he does not wish to be disturbed by anyone. He gave direct orders not to let ANYONE in. Not even you, Commodore.“
„But we have to see the Governor!!!! It’s important! It’s something concerning his daughter.“ Commodore Norrington became impatient.
„I’m afraid, but you’ll have to come back tomorrow.“
„Tomorrow? I’ve already told you, it is important! You will regret it if you don`t let us go to the Governor!“ Norrington nearly shouted.
„I will regret it if I let you pass through this door. The Governor will make sure of it.“
Norrington started insulting the guard just as Elizabeth had insulted Norrington. And this time it was Elizabeth who said: „Watch your language, Commodore! It’s not nice to insult this guard. He’s only doing his job!“
Just as Norrington wanted to answer Elizabeth, the Governor approached the door.
„What’s going on here? Didn’t I tell you I didn’t want to see anybody today and that I wanted absolute silence? How am I supposed to work with all the shouting?“ he addressed the guard.
„I’m sorry, Govenor! Those people didn’t want to go away. I told them you didn’t want to see them, but they wouldn’t listen...!“
At that moment the Governor saw his daughter Elizabeth standing behind Commodore Norrington. „Elizabeth!!“ He ran towards his daughter then he turned back to the guard: „Why didn’t you let them in. She’s my daughter and you know how seldom her visits are!!“
The guard tried to excuse himself, but the Governor made a hand movement that clearly told him to be quiet.
„Elizabeth! How nice to see you again! It’s been a long time since you last visited me. You look beautiful. Why don’t you and Mr Turner come in? I think you have a lot to tell.“
„I am sure of that Governor!“, Norrington interrupted, „That is why I brought them here. They have something really important to tell you. But we should go inside first!“

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[OrlandoBloom]

This is great!! Please keep posting!!

[Corinna Turner]

Thanks!! I have some more and the Flashback is finally finished.

So they went inside to the Governor’s office. “Please sit down!” The Governor ordered and motioned to the chairs on the other side of his desk while he sat down in his own armchair.
“What do you want to tell me, Elizabeth?”
“Want? I don’t WANT to tell you anything. This person,”, she shot an evil glare at Commodore Norrington, “made me come here to tell you something that is none of your business.”
“Elizabeth! If it is something concerning you, it is indeed my business. You are my daughter!”
“But I am old enough to decide for myself and I don’t need your opinion about what I am doing. You can’t control me. I am no little child anymore.”
“I think we can discuss that when I know why Commodore Norrington was nice enough to bring you bring you here, as you don’t visit me anymore at your own will.”
“He can tell you then, if he thinks it’s important that you know.” Elizabeth nearly shouted.
“Would you be so nice, Commodore, and finally tell me what’s going on?”
“Sure, Governor. The reason I brought your daughter here, is one I, myself, only found out by chance. Here”, he took Elizabeth’s hand and showed her ring to the Governor, “your daughter is engaged with Mr Turner. I thought you wanted to know this, Governor.” Norrington smiled triumphantly while the Governor looked surprised, even shocked and was quite speechless. When he had finally found his voice again he stuttered: “B- but E- Elizabeth, why d- didn’t y-you w- want t- to tell me this? I’ve got the right to know. This can’t be true. You really want to marry Mr Turner? Elizabeth, you are far too young to marry.” While the Governor’s face turned quite pale because of the shock, Elizabeth’s face turned red with fury: “I told you before, father, I am old enough to decide on my own, and I am old enough to marry whom I want. And by the way, you didn’t care how old I was when you wanted me to marry Norrington.”
“Commodore Norrington, if you please.” Norrington interjected.
“Whatever, I am going to marry Will. You can either agree with the marriage and be happy for us or you can disagree with the marriage and never see me again, farther. It’s your choice.”
“That’s blackmail!”
“Call it whatever you want, but decide now, cause I don’t have time to wait for your answer the whole day.”
“I don’t have a choice then. I have to agree to the marriage.”
“You can’t!”, Norrington burst out, because he had still hoped that Elizabeth might marry him someday. “Commodore, I have to agree. I cannot stand the thought of never seeing my daughter again.”
“So, here we are. After you have agreed to the marriage we can go. Come on, Will. I don’t want to be in the presence of that man”, she shot another glare at Norrington, “longer than necessary.” So the two walked out of the office of the Governor, leaving two very angry men behind. Will and Elizabeth walked out of the castle…

~ End Flashback ~

when the image in Will’s mind began to swim and he slowly woke up to see that there was a man sitting next to his bed- the one man he despised so much- Norrington. And at the foot of his bed stood another man- one Will only liked slightly more than the Commodore- Governor Swan. He had a very concerned look on his face, one, Will knew, had nothing to do with the fact that Will did not seem to be feeling well, but that was only concerned about where his daughter was and whether she was alright. Will looked back to Norrington and saw an equally concerned look on his face.

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