PotC 2

[Christine Daaé]

THIS IS GREAT!! Please keep posting!!

[DZBrick666]

It is indeed interesting so far, but I'm thinking that Norrington is coming across as a bit of an obnoxious snob...is that the intention? I just didn't get that out of his character. Please continue, nonetheless.

[Corinna Turner]

Thanks! And yes, Norrington is supposed to be that way. It's just because Elena and I don't like him! ;D
But I think it'll get a bit better later on, not so sure right now. And I'm really sorry that I don't have more, but I'm quite busy with school lately!!! Sorry!!!!

[palestblackpearl]

Really wonderful! I'm enjoying this.

[Corinna Turner]

I finally wrote more!!! but this part isn't very good. And it's not much.

”Norrington!”, Will shouted, “Why aren’t you already looking for her?”
“Mr Turner!”, Norrington answered in a sharp voice, “As Elizabeth was about to become your wife we thought that we had to wait for your decision. And if I may say so, you were the one who fainted, not me!”
“Oh, well, I am terribly sorry if I care for my future wife!! Now you get my decision: Get the Dauntless and the Interceptor II ready, right away, I want to leave within the hour!”
“Do you think that’s wise?” the Governor interjected.
“What else can we do? Wait here till the kidnapper brings her back?”, Will shouted, his voice dripping with sarcasm, “And now, leave!!”
So the Governor and the Commodore made their way out of the room, nearly running into the maiden.
“Mr Turner, you are awake!”
“Yes! If you could please wait outside, so that I can dress. I’ve got to look for Elizabeth!”
“But, Mr Turner! A bit of rest would be better for you!”
“I’ve rested enough!! Elizabeth might already be far away! We can’t waste more time. The Commodore already wasted enough!”
“If you say so!” And with that the maiden left the room.

Only 10 minutes later Will was ready to leave and hurried to the dock of the Interceptor II. There he met Commodore Norrington and Governor Swan.
“Mr Turner”, the Commodore started, but was interrupted by Will.
“Don’t tell me the ships aren’t ready yet!”
“The Interceptor II is ready but the Dauntless still isn’t completely prepared.”
“You wait here then and look for Elizabeth on the Dauntless. I’ll leave with the Crew of the Interceptor II. We’ll both look individually for Elizabeth.”
“But she could be anywhere!”
“Well, you’ll have to make a bigger effort in finding her then. Come back if you found her. Otherwise come back here in a week!”
“But we can’t look for her an entire week. What if one of us found her! The other one will go on looking.”
“I can’t change that. We just have to find her and if you, and especially you, Governor, are not ready to do anything to rescue Elizabeth I don’t know what kind of father you are!”
“He’s right, Commodore! We have to do anything to find her!”, Governor Swan surrendered.
“So, I expect it’s alright if I leave now?” Will said, already starting to walk towards to Interceptor II. When the two men nodded, he got onto the ship and told the Captain to set the sails (?).

[Christine Daaé]

Nice!! Keep posting!!!

[Chloe]

I like it it is really good it kinda gose a little different. Than i would expect it to.

[Corinna Turner]

Ok, I've got some more, but it's not much, cause I still have to type the rest of it.

A few hours later they still hadn’t found anything. Will was standing at the reeling (sp?) thinking about his past five years with Elizabeth. Then he remembered the first time he saw her after he first came to Port Royal.

~ Flashback ~
Will woke up starring bewildered around the room, he was in. He was lying in a big bed that stood in a very big room. He looked around and saw that this room normally was unused, because there was nothing standing on the dresser and the bedside table. When he looked around to that table, he saw that a young beautiful girl was sitting on a chair next to him. “Will, you’re awake! I’m going to call for my father.”
“Miss Swan, wasn’t it?”
“Just call me Elizabeth.” And with that she left the room and Will got lost in his thoughts.
<Wow, that girl is beautiful! But she’s not my league! My Dad was only a merchant sailor and she is the Governor’s daughter! I will never be able to get together with her. I don’t know what I should do now. I have nowhere to go!”
His thoughts were interrupted when Elizabeth and her father entered with a maid at their heals.
“Mr Turner, that was your name, right? Are you feeling better?”, Will nodded and the Governor continued: “You can stay here till you are perfectly well again and then we’ll look for someone who will take care of you.”
“Thank you, Governor Swan!”
At that moment someone knocked on the door and entered at the Governor’s call. It was a man that Will had got a glimpse of on the ship, but didn’t know much more about him, then that he seemed to be a high person in wherever he was.
“Is he awake?”, the man asked.
“Yes, he just woke up, Leutnant Norrington.”, Elizabeth answered. So he was a Leutnant then. For some reason Will felt he didn’t like that man, even though he hardly knew him. Only the way he looked at Elizabeth made Will furious, but he didn’t know why. He was only 10 years old, he couldn’t be falling in love, he was far too young for that. And he had just told himself that Elizabeth wasn’t in the same league with him. He’d go back to the other civiliants of that town and find someone there.
“Excuse me, Sir”, he said in a quiet voice, “but where am I? Which town is this?” He just needed to know this in case they’d send him to another town, he needed to know where Elizabeth lived.
“This is Port Royal.” So he was in Port Royal, he had never heard of that town and he had absolutely no idea where in the Caribbean he was, if he even was in the Caribbean.
“Well, there have to be some people here, who’ll take care of me.”, he thought.
And sure enough, a week later he moved into the forge of Mr Brown. He had to work there and he didn’t see Elizabeth any more, but he was save, he had something to eat and he didn’t have to sleep in the street. That was something.

~ End Flashback ~

Will was ripped out of his thought, by the sudden call “Pirates!” from a crew member.

End of Chapter 1

[Christine Daaé]

This is so good!! Post more soon!!!

[Corinna Turner]

I've already written the next part, but I've got to type it, and it somehow gets a bit like a "Groschenroman" my teacher would say. Well, like really corny, but I promise it's only the next part, cause I didn't know how to go on.

[Chloe]

Wow! I love it! You are very talented! Maybe you should actually give that to the script writters and have them use that! Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!